KatraN-345

20th Jan 2022, 3:25 AM

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Reply Edit Delete -JoKeR-, 20th Jan 2022, 3:25 AM

Yay ...finally finished that page.

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Reply Edit Delete shamest, 20th Jan 2022, 3:50 AM

Oh nice
LOL Nirrod how can you not know you are sitting on him.

Reply Edit Delete Chains, 20th Jan 2022, 10:54 AM

Ah, yes, the return of the unreliable floor plan, the writer of which should be fucking executed for incompetence.

Reply Edit Delete shamest, 20th Jan 2022, 1:27 PM

maybe
That may have been the intent to make it hard to read to ouysiders

Reply Edit Delete Chains, 20th Jan 2022, 2:07 PM

If the floor plan of your prison regularly finds its way into the hands of non-authorised people, then you have bigger problems and also some security personnel to fire/try for corruption. Or treason. Or both.

Reply Edit Delete -JoKeR-, 20th Jan 2022, 2:19 PM

Well it's still Reju who "borrowed" it.
If Riaud had stolen it THEN they would have a massive security problem.
"You gave WHO our floor plan?!?"
"Well... he asked nicely... and looked at me like a happy puppy."
"..."

Reply Edit Delete shamest, 21st Jan 2022, 1:35 AM

Lol
I think Riand has a better than 80% chance of pulling it off. Providing his reasoning sound logical.

Reply Edit Delete Chains, 20th Jan 2022, 3:41 PM

Which compounds my initial issue.

I have no problem with a trained infiltrator (which Reju certainly seems to qualify as) managing to aquire sensitive documents.

These documents being so faulty as to be near useless for their intended purpose however is not excusable.

Not hating on your storytelling here, fuckups like this happen, so I couldn't even call it unrealistic (which I wouldn't in the first place, as that "criticism" is so overused and usually misplaced it has lost all meaning).

I am, however hating on that unnamed, unseen, not-even-a-backround-character FUCK that wrote up a floor plan documenting the layout of traps for internal use, and cocked it up.

DO YOU WANT DEAD GRUNTS? BECAUSE THAT IS HOW YOU GET DEAD GRUNTS! Seriously have some pride in your work, and some consideration for the lives your risking.

I probably shouldn't get so worked up about a minor backround detail.

Reply Edit Delete -JoKeR-, 20th Jan 2022, 4:37 PM

@Chains

Calm down pal (^___^)

You can see that floor-plan more as a mnemonic device for guards who already know every single trap by rote. Novices are not allowed to enter that part with the traps.

And the "lost" page is a security measurement for when the plan gets actually stolen. You can see that page as a dongle, only those who have that dongle (knowledge of that region) can use it completely.

It's not perfect ...but it's not their fault that the architect of that jail was either a genius or a mad man.
And who was actually crazy enough to build all this?!

This will be explained later. (^__-)

Reply Edit Delete shamest, 21st Jan 2022, 1:45 AM

My take
If a building needs a book for a map. It is huge. Being huge it changes over time. New construction within. Other events change parts of the building. If changes happen too quickly. not all changes get updated in a timely manner.

Reply Edit Delete Chains, 20th Jan 2022, 5:11 PM

I have opinions when it comes to technical documentatition.

STRONG opinions.

Reply Edit Delete Maeke, 20th Jan 2022, 6:42 PM

Well that was funny, and dangerous in some way.....
This said, i allways am suprised when i see some expression in my iwn language, french, on english publications.
ps; the correct expression is "à propos" but the meaning is a bit off.

Reply Edit Delete -JoKeR-, 20th Jan 2022, 6:52 PM

@Maeke
Yeah the term apropos in English and German means "by the by" or "regarding".

Reply Edit Delete Maeke, 20th Jan 2022, 8:36 PM

Well the real meaning is something like "on this subject", but even we frenchies are using it outside of it's real meaning.

Reply Edit Delete shamest, 23rd Jan 2022, 2:21 AM

à propos
To be honest I have heard this word in some English films. Reading certain English Lit. In the US it is rarely used sadly. Your use of it nicely Bring out Reju cultured side against Nirrod's rougher. I look Reju's expression in the last panel.

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